Rejected All the Way Down the Mine - PK Submission

[HelloKittyRo]

Hello everyone! I have a brand new parkour map submission! I failed at the last one, so I decided to try to make another one! I hope it has some improvements, and is much better!

Username of the builder: HelloKittyRo

Photos of my PK: As mentioned in the last PK submission, my computer is not capable of taking screenshots. If it isn't to much trouble, can the judge just take a look at the PK on the creative server?

Plot Warp: /plot visit hellokittyro 2

Difficulty: Medium

Jump Count: 39 Jumps (The course is medium because it has harder jumps that should not be in Easy.)

I hope you enjoy this PK! Any feedback in the comments section would be nice as well!

From,
HelloKittyRo

 

[Txilsy]

Hello Kitty,

Thanks for submitting your map! I've come to inform you that this map will be rejected.

Points that influenced the decision:
- The theme is pretty common on the parkour world, there are a ton of mine and ore themed parkour courses.
- The build, especially from the outside, is not that appealing to look at. It's just a long tube with stone and ores, take a look around the current added maps for some reference and inspiration. I'd advise for next time to pick a theme with an easier build.
- The jumps are pretty repetitive, most are normal block jumps and a few cobblestone fences are mixed into the course. Next time, make sure to use more variety; ladders, fences, water and many more. Also, we prefer to have courses without barrier blocks, so keep that in mind as well.
- The length indicates it to be an easy course and at the moment I would have to agree with that. The jumps are not that hard and considering the course is rather short, it would have to be an easy course.

Thanks again for submitting, we'd love to see another map sometime soon, so don't hesitate on making and submitting another one. :)

Also, if you have any questions or concerns, just PM me here on the forums or on Discord.