Rejected AloeVera (My first expert map submission)

[ItsRainingMen101]

Creator: ItsRainingMen101
NOTM: AloeVera
TP: /plot tp itsrainingmen101 1

 

[ItsRainingMen101]

http://imgur.com/NaEF1zM

http://imgur.com/KkHO22e

 

[sapqhire]

Really nice build, great variety of jumps, hope it gets accepted!! +1

 

[Shinxray]

Hoi ItsRainingMen101,
Sorry to tell you that your map have been rejected.
The theme is really original (pretty odd theme tbh xD), the build could be better, I like the bottle, but there is way too many floating jumps, making your map messy. The parkour is not really good, pretty repetitive, and the difficulty through your parkour is really weird, some part are really easy (Like the first one before the vine), and some are too hard (Ladder neo, the weird cross neo glass pane…).

Thanks for submitting your map, would be really good to see more maps from you !