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Hey there Liibe,
After reviewing your map, we have sadly come to the conclusion to reject said map.
First off to encourage you, this is a big step up from your last submission (Strange) so we can see you're improving! Now onto the map,
The build is too messy for our liking, as it seems like several mini builds crammed together. Next time try make use of one more focused singular build which has more details and shaping!
The theme is unoriginal aswell as we have a couple of maps with an art theming (CatArt, MonaLisa to name a couple). Before creating a parkour please make sure to check out this template here to see all the maps accepted on the server!
The parkour had some issues however, the difficulty was all over the place, sometimes feeling harder then the designated difficulty. For example, the triple neo. A lot of the difficulty issues were from inconsistent checkpoint placement, since so many checkpoints were spread to far out it caused the parkour to have hard jump after hard jump. The the pathing was confusing as several directions were unclear when playing through, try adding signs or heads to work this out! The variation was ok, but it felt like it still had jump after same jump after same jump. Try to get more creative with how certain aspects of the parkour are worked in.
With all this in mind we hope you take this onboard to make your next map even better! [Dooble]
If you have any questions feel free to reach out to me on discord at Elly#5555
Elly
After reviewing your map, we have sadly come to the conclusion to reject said map.
First off to encourage you, this is a big step up from your last submission (Strange) so we can see you're improving! Now onto the map,
The build is too messy for our liking, as it seems like several mini builds crammed together. Next time try make use of one more focused singular build which has more details and shaping!
The theme is unoriginal aswell as we have a couple of maps with an art theming (CatArt, MonaLisa to name a couple). Before creating a parkour please make sure to check out this template here to see all the maps accepted on the server!
The parkour had some issues however, the difficulty was all over the place, sometimes feeling harder then the designated difficulty. For example, the triple neo. A lot of the difficulty issues were from inconsistent checkpoint placement, since so many checkpoints were spread to far out it caused the parkour to have hard jump after hard jump. The the pathing was confusing as several directions were unclear when playing through, try adding signs or heads to work this out! The variation was ok, but it felt like it still had jump after same jump after same jump. Try to get more creative with how certain aspects of the parkour are worked in.
With all this in mind we hope you take this onboard to make your next map even better! [Dooble]
If you have any questions feel free to reach out to me on discord at Elly#5555
Elly
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