Rejected Ash Clouds - Map Submission

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  • Username: BlackWolff
  • Map name: Ash Clouds
  • Photos of your Parkour:
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  • The # of your Plot / or warp name to it: 117;108
  • Difficulty (Easy, Medium, Hard, Expert, Insane) Easy
  • Number of jumps (Optional) 26 jumps
The theme of this plot is lush greenery at the ground and fire/ash in the sky.
 

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Hello BlackWolff,

I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
The theme is a bit unoriginal, as we already have a map based on clouds (Clouds.) Before creating a map, please make sure that the theme has not already been done before by going here and going to the google doc in the thread: https://manacube.com/threads/parkour-list-with-theme.20194/
The build is quite plain, and messy as it is scattered throughout. In the future, try to focus on having one main structure instead of several tinier ones. Try adding more details/block variety to your build as well!
The parkour is quite repetitive throughout, so try to incorporate different jump styles throughout your entire map! This may include: water, lava, vines, heads, snow/ice, and many other possibilities depending on your theme! The length of the course and difficulty of the jumps do fit the easy difficulty.

Thank you for submitting this map, I would love to see more submissions from you!
Have a nice day,
Kristina
 
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