Closed Balls of slime - Insane

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Username: monster_admin
Map name: balls of slime
photos: parkour 1.PNG parkour 2.PNG
warp: /plot h monster_admin
Difficult: Insane
Numbers of jump: 130+
Builder: Monster_admin
 

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Hi there,
First of all, the theme is very unoriginal, as I can recall seeing lots of maps with the same/similar theme, and the map itself only has one jump of slime parkour in, which is a shame. However, as I love slime parkour I do believe there should be a slime themed Insane map. Moreover, the map itself isn't very attractive, it's just a big glass dome with parkour inside, and concluding this, towards the end of the map it gets pretty messy as the blocks you have chosen do not match the "slime" theme. You have not put much effort into this at all, as I can tell you have used world edit to create your glass sphere. Your slime balls are also positioned pretty badly, and are definitely off proportion. However, I did enjoy doing the parkour, it was very fun whilst some of the jumps were a bit challenging.
Furthermore, I am going to give this map a -0
Good luck though :)
[DOUBLEPOST=1528210089,1528209461][/DOUBLEPOST]There's no point in rating my post disagree. If you can't take a little bit of criticism there's no point in posting your map on the forums because I'm sure a lot of people will agree with me that it is a pretty bad map. If you still think your map is good, you should compare it to other members' Insane maps that have been accepted, because that is the standard in which you need to be meeting.
 

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Hi hi,
I agree with what SleepyDiva said, this map has a very unoriginal theme with there already being a slime map (SlimePK). There's only 1 slime jump which honestly doesn't represent the "Slime" theme very well. The build is also very unattractive (were the spheres worldedited?) and there's only one block for the build. I really enjoy slime parkour so if you added a good variety of jumps, made a good build while still keeping the slime theme, and having that build be attractive, I'd love this. -1
Good luck nonetheless,
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Hello,

This submission is being closed because of the inability to find the course. If you have a way to get to the course, then please resubmit this course :)

-Ashley (ThePKFish, fishy1980)
 
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