Rejected Bastille - a froggiepop map :)

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Heya froggiepop!
Sadly I will be rejecting your map.

The THEME of your map closely resembles that of a temple but seems very messy. I would advise you to try to clean it up/show that it is distinctly a temple.

The BUILD of your map is lacking in detail and depth. When creating a build ensure to add as much detail so it looks nice to play on. Create a "main build" to bring your map together even more!

The PARKOUR of your map is unvaried and repetitive, try adding more interesting blocks for your jumps! The difficulty and length are fine, but there are no checkpoints! The floating jumps also make your map look messy, try to incorporate these more within the build.
You can read here for a map submission guide and tips on creating maps: https://manacube.wiki/en/parkour/making-maps/parkour-maps

Any questions at all, shoot me a DM on discord (in my signature).
I hope to see more submissions from you in the future, cheers!
- Jash
 
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