Rejected Beach - Donator Easy

[gracc]

Creator: GraceTrash

Plot: /plot home GraceTrash 5

Screenshots: http://prntscr.com/ealrrf
http://prntscr.com/ealrxb
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Difficulty: Donator Easy

Number of Jumps: About 30

 

[Slumpd]

I really like the idea and theme of this parkour and I don't think manacube currently has a beach parkour? but from above, the beach is just a rectangle and that doesn't look too attractive. You can skip the head hitters ( and jumps after it) by jumping onto the blue umbrella right before them, if that makes sense
But best of luck

 

[Txilsy]

Heya Grace,

The theme of the course is great! Very clear as well. But like Couch said, it does look kind of rectangular making it unattractive. Maybe make it a little more natural, like an island?

If you're on the south of the blue parasol, it is indeed skippable, especially with speed. I recommend putting barriers, like you did before that part.

Good luck!

 

[Shron]

Hey Grace,
I am going to reject this course, because of the reasons mentioned before already. I agree with them 100%. The theme is a very nice idea, so you are more than welcomed to revamp your course with the same theme and try to deliver us an awesome parkour :D
Thanks for submitting this course and I hope to see more nice themes in the future!