Rejected beachy-breezy easy parkour

[bbgbrooke]

username: bbgbrooke

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difficulty; easy (36 jumps)

At the end of the course i added some jumps to act as clouds because i felt the map was too easy. but this could just be how i feel so the last jumps could be removed and the last checkpoint could be the end.

also I know the sand theme has been done a lot and if beach has this could easily be turned into palm tree themed
I hope you like my map!

 

[camron315]

+1.
I believe this would be good as an easy level, but I think you should of added more decoration.

 

[Txilsy]

Hello Brooke,

Thanks for submitting your map! I've come to inform you that this map will be rejected.

In a way, your theme has been used a few times before. You didn't manage to top those builds or courses, so I'd recommend picking an original theme next time. The jumps are pretty repetitive and even though it fits the difficulty, it doesn't bring a challenge nor is it fun to do. Try using more variety to keep it interesting and have them incorporated unto the build to keep it clean.

Thanks again for submitting, we'd love to see another map sometime soon, so don't hesitate on making and submitting another one.
Also, if you have any questions or concerns, just PM me here on the forums or on Discord.

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