Rejected BEDROCK TNT PARKOURRRRRRRRRRRR

[Parkour build pro]

yo /plot h gostkowskiftw

my new bedrock map just cause i have no ideas leave a comment what i should really build cause i didnt try

MEDIUMMM

80 jumps

good LUCK

ALSO TELL ME HOW I CAN INPROVE MY COURSES

IM NEW TO BUILDINGGGGGGGGG

 

[Wafflethecat]

I'm going to be honest, but harsh with you, just like you were with us, minus the honest.

You do not live up to your name at all, you claimed a master piece was coming. This was a real let down. Here is the moral of the story.

-No effort at all.

-Building was just plain rushed.

-You know what i'm done being nice and civilized time to do what you do: This was horrible, you did absolutely nothing to make this a good build at all, your name is not what you are at all and this was just pointless. I found myself staring at this build saying to my self: "This is crap, this is crap." over and over and over, just AHHHH! Your comments have literally driven me to insanity. I normally say best of luck at the end, but you know what. No. Not to you.



ALL HATERS! -I am not being rude mainly because of his build, it is his other comments he left on other builds. Go visit them, he makes harsh ones. And if he deletes them, meh.
[DOUBLEPOST=1448424282][/DOUBLEPOST]The first jump is not even possible . _ .
[DOUBLEPOST=1448424341][/DOUBLEPOST]The jumps are crud, I mean come on. I could go straight to the end. Also... umm yeah, I have nothing left to say.

 

[Parkour build pro]

Yo ok How can I improve it

 

[Tenshi]

comment what i should really build cause i didnt try

And you said that you would live up to your name. Im just gonna review this now, But feel free to ignore our comments again.

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Hello dear parkourist! My name is Tenshi and Im going to leave you some tips and comments about your parkour.
I will also state wiether or not I think it should be accepted, rejected, or reviewed.

Firstly, Theme. The theme isnt clear at all. The colors are harmful to the eye. Bedrock and TNT blocks do not look well together and overall your parkour was sloppy. The first jump is not possible to people without /speed, and alot of your build is literally random blocks, leaving no sense of direction.

Secondly, Parkour.
View this thread here for help with jumps: http://www.minecraftforum.net/forum...tive-mode/369499-parkour-creation-tips-tricks

Thirdly, Rank.
This parkour would be ranked NON-EXISTANT. Reasons why I wouldnt have said Medium, Are because of not only your impossible jump, but because of the directions.

And Lastly, My comment.
This parkour should or should not be denied.
Reasons Why:
- Choppy
- Impossible
- Overall Ugly In Color

Tips To Improve:
- Work On Blueprinting Your Design Before Making It
- Make The Build Before The Parkour
- Actually Spend Time On It

Thank you for submitting a parkour, Remember that this is not a final decision.
Thank you for your time. If this parkour is accepted/rejected, Remember that you can always submit another parkour, at another time.


~Tenshi

 

[Parkour build pro]

ok thank you for the feedback but all the jumps are possible
i will improve it but i need to think of an idea to build @Sans

 

[Wafflethecat]

ok thank you for the feedback but all the jumps are possible
i will improve it but i need to think of an idea to build @Sans

I played through the map. You have quite a few five blocks = impossible. Maybe double check em'

 

[Parkour build pro]

ok well im deleting this map anyways and making a better one sorry

 

[Angel_Scarz]

Parkour Build Pro how are you a pro? you always say bro please stop it also no offence but this parkour should be REJECTED!
Reasons Include:
Greifed.
Theme Is unclear.
Jumps Are Bad.
And it just is random.
Sorry.
Also please stop saying bro! ALSO how are you 19?!!!!!?!?!?!?

 

[Parkour build pro]

thank you for the advice im making a new one

 

[gogre]

No comment. Denied.