Rejected beefore dawn - Easy Map

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Hello lameoldegg,
first of all I'm assuming its your first plot. We cannot TP to the coordinates so if its not your first plot we won't be able to find it.

From what I can see in the screenshot, there isn't really a build other than some floating islands and clouds. The theme is therefore taken since there are maps with islands and clouds. Also, the name of the map is beefore dawn, but there's nothing here related to bees or dawn.
From what I can see in the parkour it has different blocks at different parts, but there aren't any parts with different blocks all in a flow. Try to make your parkour flow with different blocks instead of different parts next time.

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Hello lameoldegg,

I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
The theme is a bit
confusing, and hard to see it reflected in your map. Be sure to incorporate your theme into the build and parkour better next time!
The build is also a bit confusing to see what it is, and is also
messy with the structures being spread apart, so be sure to group your structures closer together next time! Also, try to refrain from using floating islands, as maps featuring them are typically no longer accepted.
The parkour is
varied in a few spots; however, it gets repetitive within each section, so make sure you have different jump styles throughout your entire map! The parkour is also floating quite a bit throughout (meaning it isn't attached to the build) which makes it look messy. The length of this course is good for the easy difficulty; however, the difficulty of the jumps is inconsistent.

Thank you for submitting this map, I would love to see more submissions from you!
Have a nice day,
Kristina
 
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