Rejected Birdcage - Hard

[JakeNoot]

Username: JakeNoot
Map name: Birdcage
Photos of your Parkour:
https://i.badlion.net/CcNdQc25tB73Y6qjT9H2rA.png

https://i.badlion.net/ZxizbQ9ZNmEoVL7GoPNw3P.png

https://i.badlion.net/kbPLZXrfJTrM5uirUr6kfJ.png

The # of your Plot / or warp name to it: 91;-132 (/plot v JakeNoot 10)
Difficulty: Hard
Number of jumps: ~80

Map does have one teleport pad going from 13222, 85, -19372 to 13217, 113, -19385. Signs and black wool at both places : )

 

[BDOsborne]

the birds must like the cage :P

 

[Elly_x]

Heya,

I regret to inform you that your map is REJECTED.

The THEME of your map is unoriginal, as we already have a map based around a cage (Cage). While yes this cage map isn't about a bird, the main builds on both are almost completely similar. Before creating a parkour please make sure to check out this template here to see all the maps accepted on the server!

The BUILD of your map is a problem. The build seems very empty with lots of extra space. I suggest possibly making it smaller and adding some details/texture to the map.

The PARKOUR fits the length of a hard map, so good job on that! The parkour was too difficult, mostly because of the unbalanced checkpoints. There are many hard jumps with no surrounding checkpoints. The parkour also felt repetitive with many jumps being the same basic function. I suggest sprucing this up by adding some more creative jumps.

Thank you for taking the time to create a map, I hope to see more submissions from you in the future.
If you have any questions feel free to reach out to me on discord at Elly#5555
Elly