Rejected Birdo

[Mfenix]

Map name: Birdo
Creator: Mfenix111
Checkpoints: 5
Jumps: 100
Difficulty: Expert
Easter eggs: 2
Plot: /plot visit Mfenix111 4
Screenshots:

https://prnt.sc/l4kg6l
https://prnt.sc/l4kgv3
https://prnt.sc/l4kh8q


There are 3 tp points:

From -7809 80 -1713 to -7811 80 -1717
From -7813 80 -1713 to -7814 74 -1717
From -7811 80 -1719 to -7811 95 -1703

 

[AlaskanFire]

Hiya Mfenix!
It would be nice to include how to get to your plot instead of putting cords, that way everyone could have access to it!
Based on your screenshots, I really like the look of the build.

However, I think you should indicate where you put barriers as to let people know where they are located and therefore, where to jump.
The jumps are unique and interesting! I feel like for an Expert Map, you should add some décor around the map, so it will make the map seem more spread out and attract people to your course.

It's a +1 for me! Good luck!

 

[Mfenix]

Hiya Mfenix!
It would be nice to include how to get to your plot instead of putting cords, that way everyone could have access to it!
Based on your screenshots, I really like the look of the build.

However, I think you should indicate where you put barriers as to let people know where they are located and therefore, where to jump.
The jumps are unique and interesting! I feel like for an Expert Map, you should add some décor around the map, so it will make the map seem more spread out and attract people to your course.

It's a +1 for me! Good luck!

Oh ye I forgot, now it's changed
Thanks for the feedback.

 

[AOMinecrafting]

What the heck is an easter egg?

 

[Shinxray]

Hoi Mfenix111,
I'm gonna put your map in reviewing,
The theme is not that original, but the way you build it is pretty interesting. The build is decent, I still think the Birdo looks a bit weird (Mostly the hands and the head), but it's only my opinion (Another thing, there is a lot of spelling mistakes in some signs, but you do what you want). The parkour is good, it's varied and interesting, but just WAY too hard (Even for an insane in my opinion, like it's harder than Bandit for me), so I will suggest you to nerf atleast enough hard for an insane (The map was too long for an expert in my opinion).

 

[Shinxray]

Hoi again Mfenix111,
I've checked the map again, and nothing as been done, so I'm just gonna reject the map for the reason stated above, you can still resubmit the map when you want.