Rejected Birds tree -- Hard

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Hayleyx

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Hayleyx
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Hello!

Unfortunately, your map is being REJECTED.
The theme itself is unoriginal, as we do have quite a few bird maps, including WinterBirds, which is the same tree concept.

The main "tree" is accurate, and has great shaping so good job on that! Unfortunately, the birds lack in shaping and details. As mentioned above, the scale of these birds are very small which means you cannot add the details which this part of the build lacks. Scaling a build up can help ensure you can add these details.

The parkour itself is inconsistent. In addition. the parkour is repetitive and lacks in variation. Use more variation such as panes,, soul sand, minecarts, daylight sensors, cocoa beans, heads, etc. to space out your variation and improve flow!

We hope to see more maps from you in the future!
Have a good day/night
-Hayley
 
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