Rejected Black & White - Medium

[Mutant_Cacti]

Map creator: Mutant_Cacti

Map name: Black & White

Difficulty: Medium

/plot visit Mutant_Cacti 1

42 jumps, 3 checkpoints

 

[DapperDaphne]

Hey! I would just like to say that the parkour here isn't varied much so maybe try using different things like flower pots, trap doors, vines, etc. Also, the build looks nice but there should one main build with detailed theming. Have a great day!

 

[Mutant_Cacti]

Hey! I would just like to say that the parkour here isn't varied much so maybe try using different things like flower pots, trap doors, vines, etc. Also, the build looks nice but there should one main build with detailed theming. Have a great day!

Thanks! This is the first parkour map I've ever made, so thanks for the help! I'll definitely keep that in mind.

 

[DapperDaphne]

Thanks! This is the first parkour map I've ever made, so thanks for the help! I'll definitely keep that in mind.

Yeah! The rules change a lot over time so I always recommend reading the other submissions here because the judges say why it was accepted/denied. Just keep trying!

 

[sapqhire]

Hello Mutant_Cacti,

Unfortunately, I will be Rejecting your map.
The theme isn't original, as there are a few maps already relating to colours (RedvsBlue - Medium, BluevsOrange - Hard for some examples) Please refer to the document linked in this thread - https://manacube.com/threads/parkour-list-with-theme.20194/ to make sure your map idea is original.
There isn't really a main build. In the future, try to have one or two main builds that are relevant to your theme, and then incorporate the jumps into that, rather than just having jumps over the void.
The parkour is very repetitive, as most of it is normal blocks, with some cobble walls at the end. Try to experiment with a larger variety of blocks and items when building parkour, as well as the way you utilize these, as this will make your map overall more enjoyable to complete.
The length is good for a medium and the difficulty is good for an easy map.

Thanks for submitting your map! I hope to see more maps from you in the future.