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Loading Status...Rejected Blue And Red, A map id like to sumbit
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Hello Wolfleagcy,
Unfortunately, I will be Rejecting your map.
The theme isn't original, as there are already a couple maps with the same idea of having 2 sides of parkour in a race style (BlueVSOrange - Hard, RedVSBlue - Medium) Please refer to the document in this thread - https://manacube.com/threads/parkour-list-with-theme.20194/ to make sure your map idea is original.
There isn't really a main build to this map, in the future, try to have a main build that replicates the theme, then build the parkour into that, rather than just having jumps floating over the void.
The parkour is a bit repetitive, you did use a few different styles of jumps, however you grouped most of them. What I mean by this, is that you would have a sequence of just ladders, then just normal blocks etc. Try to mix up your jumps more, as well as using a larger variety of blocks and items when building jumps, as this will make your map overall more enjoyable to complete.
Like I previously mentioned, all of the parkour is floating, having an excessive number of jumps floating over the void can make your map look a bit messy, so try to avoid this where possible. You also used a lot of barriers, which made the map a bit confusing at points. If you are going to use barriers, try to make them visible by placing something on them like item frames, as I found some sections quite confusing with the barrier placement.
The length and difficulty are good for a medium map.
Thanks for submitting your map! I hope to see more maps from you in the future.
Unfortunately, I will be Rejecting your map.
The theme isn't original, as there are already a couple maps with the same idea of having 2 sides of parkour in a race style (BlueVSOrange - Hard, RedVSBlue - Medium) Please refer to the document in this thread - https://manacube.com/threads/parkour-list-with-theme.20194/ to make sure your map idea is original.
There isn't really a main build to this map, in the future, try to have a main build that replicates the theme, then build the parkour into that, rather than just having jumps floating over the void.
The parkour is a bit repetitive, you did use a few different styles of jumps, however you grouped most of them. What I mean by this, is that you would have a sequence of just ladders, then just normal blocks etc. Try to mix up your jumps more, as well as using a larger variety of blocks and items when building jumps, as this will make your map overall more enjoyable to complete.
Like I previously mentioned, all of the parkour is floating, having an excessive number of jumps floating over the void can make your map look a bit messy, so try to avoid this where possible. You also used a lot of barriers, which made the map a bit confusing at points. If you are going to use barriers, try to make them visible by placing something on them like item frames, as I found some sections quite confusing with the barrier placement.
The length and difficulty are good for a medium map.
Thanks for submitting your map! I hope to see more maps from you in the future.
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