Rejected Bottle Biomes

[rmc22]

Map: Bottle Biomes
Builder: rmc22
Difficulty: Hard
Warp: /plot h rmc22 7
Jumps: 85
Checkpoints: 6

Sure, Biomes isn't the most original idea for a theme, however, the bottle biomes puts an interesting and unique twist on the theme that I believe makes the map unique and original and sets it apart from other biome theme maps. Of course I'm a little bias when I say this but I think its a more interesting biome map than what has been seen in the past.

 

[r3dstraw]

The Theme is Unoriginal even thougt you tried making it Original
But all you did was put the Biomes in Bottles.
And Sometimes you get lost so put some signs here and there.
and it does get a little repetitive sometimes but i haven't tried the whole pk.
I Wish You Good Luck!

 

[Luci]

Hi Ryan,
unfortunately, I will be rejecting your map for the following reasons;
Firstly, as you said above, the theme "biomes" is not original whatsoever and is way too overused. The build is alright, but it's a little plain and its very simple, I think it could easily be improved. However, the parkour is pretty varied and the length + difficulty fits what you're going for, but I found that there were many floating jumps throughout the map which could easily make the map look more unattractive.
Thank you for submitting this map, and I'd love to see more from you in the future! :D
Luci