Rejected Bottle Caps - Easy-Medium - Submit Request

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Creator: Sandwichturtle, Helper: ilovepizzca
Map Name: Bottle Caps

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Warp name of plot: /plot visit Sandwichturtle
Difficulty: Easy/Medium
44 Parkour jumps
 

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Hello Sandwichturtle and ilovepizzca,

I regret to inform you that your map is REJECTED.

The THEME of your map is original, so good job on that! While we have maps based around soda/cans we don't have any based around the caps.

The BUILD of your map is a problem. The caps aren't that accurate for what you are going for and without the name, I would not have guessed what they were. Next time try considering adding some more details and shaping to represent your theme!

The PARKOUR fits the length and difficulty of a easy map so good job on that! Your map has good variance incorporated but it is still repetitive in some spots. I think you use a lot of ladders and with the jumps you do have you don't incorporate them in a creative way. This causes the map to feel a bit repetitive even with some variance.

Thank you for taking the time to create a map, I hope to see more submissions from you in the future.
If you have any questions feel free to reach out to me on discord at Elly#5555
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