Rejected Bowser's Big Bean Burrito Parkour Map

[XanderJames]

Username: XanderJames
Map Name: Bowser's Big Bean Burrito
ID For Map: -11;123
Number Of Jumps 54
Difficulty: Medium
Hi I Submitted This Before And Got Rejected So I Decided To Do Some Improvements To It Hopefully This Time It Can Get Accepted
Here Are Some Screenshots Of The New Map

 

[Udun]

its alright but it looks like 3d pixel art sry but a -0.5 :/

 

[k_rissy]

Hello XanderJames,

I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
The theme is original, well done.
The build is better from your previous submission. However, it could still be improved. Try having Bowser and his burrito be the main focus of the map, because at the moment the theme does not really stand out. The floor/walls also feel a bit plain and both of these could also use more details.
The parkour is still very repetitive throughout with the same clay jump used, so be sure to use different types of jumps throughout your entire map. The parkour is also a bit hard to navigate at times, so make sure you have a more direct path for players to follow.

Thank you for submitting this map, I would love to see more submissions from you!