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- Thread starter IronMancraft33
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Hihi!
Unfortunately, the map isn't original as we already have similar maps such as AirHockey and IceHockey.
The build does lack detail/texture. There could be room for improvements in the players themselves and there could be more to the builds such as the seats/audience members.
The parkour does lack some variance try adding some other jumps such as ladder, plant pots, heads, iron bars, etc. Also, try to use up more of the map with your parkour pathing- it'd be great to have parkour by the ice / glass walls! The directional sign took me a moment to figure out where to go. It may be better reworded to something such as "jump onto the slime under the red carpet and then to the fence gate". This may have just been me being blind but clear directions always help!
I hope this helps c;
Unfortunately, the map isn't original as we already have similar maps such as AirHockey and IceHockey.
The build does lack detail/texture. There could be room for improvements in the players themselves and there could be more to the builds such as the seats/audience members.
The parkour does lack some variance try adding some other jumps such as ladder, plant pots, heads, iron bars, etc. Also, try to use up more of the map with your parkour pathing- it'd be great to have parkour by the ice / glass walls! The directional sign took me a moment to figure out where to go. It may be better reworded to something such as "jump onto the slime under the red carpet and then to the fence gate". This may have just been me being blind but clear directions always help!
I hope this helps c;
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Hiya IronMancraft33!
Sadly, your map is being rejected!
The THEME of your map is unoriginal as we already have an ice hockey map on the server [IceHockey]; when creating a map, try and come up with an original theme, a full list of already accept maps can be found here.
The BUILD of your map is detailed and correct with the theme, so good work on that!
The PARKOUR of your map is mainly floating, which is no longer accepted on ManaCube; as well, the parkour blocks used for jumps lack variance. I recommend using blocks with different hitboxes, such as ladders, pistons, player heads, flower pots and water. This will allow for your parkour to be more enjoyable! Lastly, there was not a difficulty specified for your map, therefore your map has been seen as a medium map due to the jump count and difficulty.
I wish you all the best with future map submissions.
If you have any questions feel free to reach out to me on discord at Elly#5555
Have a great day,
Elly
Sadly, your map is being rejected!
The THEME of your map is unoriginal as we already have an ice hockey map on the server [IceHockey]; when creating a map, try and come up with an original theme, a full list of already accept maps can be found here.
The BUILD of your map is detailed and correct with the theme, so good work on that!
The PARKOUR of your map is mainly floating, which is no longer accepted on ManaCube; as well, the parkour blocks used for jumps lack variance. I recommend using blocks with different hitboxes, such as ladders, pistons, player heads, flower pots and water. This will allow for your parkour to be more enjoyable! Lastly, there was not a difficulty specified for your map, therefore your map has been seen as a medium map due to the jump count and difficulty.
I wish you all the best with future map submissions.
If you have any questions feel free to reach out to me on discord at Elly#5555
Have a great day,
Elly
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