Rejected buttermitch's parkour :)

[buttermitch]

Name for course: I havent thought of one yet but if you want to chose it you can

Difficulty: Hard or Expert (Theres 90-70 jumps but most are quite hard)

Checkpoints: 8 checkpoints

You can find this parkour on minevast creative server, my name is buttermitch

Screenshots: https://gyazo.com/47185d2a3d224b271c94026a3b318800
https://gyazo.com/ae5a552b50ecb105771e4fa016e6a088

 

[xBejja]

Hey Butter
Your map doesn't have a real theme. It's just something like a house. The amount of your jumps is ok but I can't test your map right now so I can't tell which difficulty would be the best.
What you can improve:
-Work more on the details
-Be a bit more creative
-Use different blocks for the jumps
-Think of a theme before trying to build a random map

These are just some suggestions so don't take it too hard :P

~Bejja

 

[Tenshi]

Hello, My name is Tenshi and I am here to give you some tips about your parkour map.
Firstly, Theme.
This map seems to not have a theme at all. If you were going to create a parkour, Ill suggest some types here.
- Pixel Art
- Foods
- Video-Games
- Household Items
- Animals

Secondly, Parkour.
View this thread here for help with jumps: http://www.minecraftforum.net/forum...tive-mode/369499-parkour-creation-tips-tricks

Thirdly, Rank.
( I have no comments here, Refer to my Theme comment )

Thank you for taking time to create a map, Ill let @Billybo10000 and @ham562 give you some feedback.
Best Regards,
Tenshi.

 

[gogre]

This map is being denied. The map seems kind of plain, its mostly made of one or two blocks and isnt very visually appealing. Although the map overall is okay, I dont think many players would enjoy to play on it.