Rejected Camman18 - Hard (Resubmission)

[WICKEDMagma]

Changes: Nerfed and shortened

Username: WICKEDMagma
Map name: Camman18
Plot: /plot v WICKEDMagma 6
Difficulty: Hard
Number of jumps: 65

(my only goal is to find diamonds get this map accepted)

 

[Shinxray]

Hello WICKEDMagma,

I will be putting your map into ONGOING. Please be patient as I discuss your map with the map judging team. If you have any questions or concerns feel free to message me on discord.

Thanks,
-Shinx

 

[Shinxray]

Hey WICKEDMagma,
Sorry to tell you that your map has been rejected.
This time the main concern is the build, I was not sure the first time so I have not mentioned it much, but we agreed with other judges that your build looks a lot like your Dream map, they have same aesthetics, a similar position... it feel kinda lazy (not saying it's bad, but it's kinda bothering). Maybe try changing his position ?
The parkour is still needs improvement, it's still quite hard but could fit I guess it fits on the harder side, but there is still a lot of annoying parts (the first whole inside his leg, the ladder jumps on the head, the firsts checkpoints, the checkpoint right after the double neo on his arm), those parts would need a whole rework.
Oh and this is impossible in 1.8 :

Thanks for submitting your map. If you have any questions, feel free messaging me on discord.
-Shinx