Hello,
Unfortunately, we will be rejecting your map.
The theme is original, so good job on that!
The build is great & has been thoroughly improved since the previous submission.
The parkour is unfortunately where the concern comes in. Overall, we would like to see a rework of checkpoints 3, 4 ,5, 7 and 8.
We hope to see more maps from you in the future.
Have a wonderful day/night
-Hayley