Closed Casino - Hard/Expert

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IPattyI

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Hey EzraSmellsBad,

It pains me to have to tell you that I will be REJECTING your map.
  • Theme: There is already a map titled "Casino" in the insane difficulty, therefore your theme is not original. Make sure to either utilize new and original themes or take creative takes on existing ones. We just don't want similar maps on the server.
  • Build: The build is not good. It lacks a central focus, the builds are just things you could find in a casino, a casino map should look like a casino. And, the components present weren't executed well either. They lack detailing and shaping, leading to a very flat, simple, and unattractive build.
  • Parkour: For future reference, you shouldn't say it's one of two difficulties. It's necessary for you to choose a difficulty beforehand so that the parkour maintains it throughout and doesn't spike. This map feels like a hard, although it was too easy at times. Furthermore, you have to integrate your parkour to your build better. It's just floating most of the time, which hurts the build quite a lot. And, you need to work on your variation. There were too many repetitive segments.
I hope you take these criticisms into consideration when submitting maps in the future, good luck!
 
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