Rejected Cave Monster Parkour

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Hey freya_paws,

Unfortunately, I will be REJECTING this map submission.
  • Theme: As we have an overabundance of mine/cave/cavern-related maps currently on our server, this is a very unoriginally themed map submission. I recommend that you look at our list of previously used maps/themes as to prevent such things: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1lZKQZMgGev6fXyhZ8nCPkTzNIj0yOjXjUTDvfzKNzl4/edit .
  • Build: I really don't like that build all that much. The exterior is already not pleasant, as it's just a ginormous stone rectangle. The interior is also not good either. It's just a mine with semi-empty rooms. I must say that the creatures are kinda cute, they're not terrible really. But's it all so bland and generic and over-used that it really is not a good build.
  • Parkour: The parkour was long enough for a medium but it felt way too easy, in my opinion. I recommend buffing the jumps or switching it to the easy difficulty. Furthermore, the problems with the parkour don't stop there. You utilized the same jumps too much. You used barrier jumps and slab jumps consecutively, they were almost the entirety of the map. It wasn't fun to do. Doing the same thing over and over again gets repetitive and boring which is why we ask you mappers to be creative when making parkour and use a bunch of different jumps (and blocks if you'd like).
I hope you take these criticisms into consideration when submitting maps in the future, good luck!
 
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