Rejected Checkers! - Medium

[JWCfive]

JWCfive
Checkers!

Warp name: Checkers!
Medium

 

[zzykrkv]

hi, I have found some skips you might want to patch, some are more insignificant than others, so its up to you. I have the intended path in blue and the skip in red.

 

[IPattyI]

Hey JWCfive,

Unfortunately, I will be REJECTING this map submission.

• Theme: As we already have a map with the same theme named "Checker", this map is not very original. Please procure to check the parkour list with all of the used ideas/themes as to prevent the submission unoriginal/recycled maps: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1lZKQZMgGev6fXyhZ8nCPkTzNIj0yOjXjUTDvfzKNzl4/edit
• Build: The build is not very good as it's just a rectangular checkered-patterned box. It's just really boring and uninventive, which leads to a very unattractive product.
• Parkour: The PK was definitely hard enough for a medium but it felt way too short, I'd amp up the number of jumps on the map. Furthermore, you should try to include a wider variety of jumps on your map. There were too many fence and ladder jumps, making it a very repetitive experience.

I hope you take these criticisms into consideration when submitting maps in the future, good luck!