Rejected Chemistry - Medium

[Odexey]

• Username - Odexey
• Map name - Chemistry
• Photos of your Parkour -
  
  
  
• The # of your Plot / or warp name to it - /plot v Odexey 1
• Difficulty (Easy, Medium, Hard, Expert, Insane) - Medium

This is my first parkour map submission. :)

 

[IPattyI]

Hey Odexey,

Unfortunately, I will be REJECTING this map submission.

• Theme: We currently have no Science/Chemistry related maps on the server, so this is most definitely an originally themed submission. Well done!
• Build: Personally, I feel that the build is all over the place. There's no real center of attention within it, it's just a bunch of things happening at once. It creates a sense of incohesion. You should definitely work on creating a central structure and on building more attractive components (be it through better detailing or shaping).
• Parkour: The PK length and difficulty definitely fit the medium map. But, it was not an enjoyable parkour to do. It was incredibly repetitive as you utilized the same jumps over and over again. You have to use a variety of jumps most of the time so that your parkour isn't boring (for example, it was block to block jump segments almost all of the time).

I hope you take these criticisms into consideration when submitting maps in the future, good luck!