Rejected Clockwork - Hard

[isaacyoshimario]

Username: isaacyoshimario
Map Name: Clockwork
Plot Number: 118;0
Difficulty: Hard
# of Jumps: 151
Note: The map is a bit long for the difficulty. Oops.

 

[sapqhire]

Hello isaacyoshimario,

Unfortunately, I will be Rejecting your map.
The theme is original, there aren't any current maps like this.
The build is pretty basic as it is just a spiral, however, the spiral decreasing in size does give a nice effect when looking at the build.
Most of the parkour is floating, I know there isn't much room on the build to incorporate jumps into, but in the future, try to avoid having an excessive number of jumps floating over the build and void, as this can make your map look a bit messy.
The parkour is very repetitive. Try to experiment with a larger variety of blocks and items when building parkour, as well as trying out new ways of utilizing these blocks, to create more original and enjoyable jumps.
The difficulty is good for a medium map, but the length is far too long, I would recommend reading over this wiki article https://manacube.wiki/parkour/making-maps/parkour-maps to make sure your map meets the requirements.

Thanks for submitting your map! I hope to see more maps from you in the future.