Rejected Clouds

[MisterMark123]

Builder: MisterMark123

Number of jumps: 46

Name map: Clouds

Difficulty: Easy/Medium (Personally I think it's more easy then medium, but due to the number of jumps I would say it's medium)

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Description:
In my hometown it didn't rain for 2 months long (normal each week it's raining at least 1 day) So I thought how I could include that in my map, with 4 different weather types: Rain, snow, thunder, wind.

 

[IPattyI]

Hey Mistermark123,

This is not your official map review, I am merely giving you some feedback. First off, although I like that you made a map that represents something in your daily life, the theme is not original. There is already a "Clouds" map in the hard difficulty that resembles your map both in theme and build. In my opinion, the build is very simple and plain. Although it's hard to really make clouds pop out, putting more effort into the designs of all of the elements in the build would definitely elevate your map. I'd say the length and difficulty fit the medium difficulty, although it'd be an easier medium. The PK could use some better variation, as there were many repetitive segments. Still, I hope to see more map submissions from you in the future, good luck!

 

[k_rissy]

Hello MisterMark123,

I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
The theme is unoriginal, as we already have a map with the exact same theme (Clouds.) Before creating a map, please make sure that the theme has not already been created before by going here: https://manacube.com/threads/parkour-list-with-theme.20194/
The build is quite messy throughout, and there isn't much block variation. Try having a bigger main structure, and including more block variety.
The parkour is repetitive with the same glass jumps throughout. Try to incorporate different jump styles throughout your entire build! This may include: water, vines, flower pots, enchantment tables, and many more different types! Overall, the length of the course and the difficulty of the jumps both fit the difficulty quite nicely!

Thank you for submitting your map, I would love to see more submissions from you!
Have a nice day,
Kristina