Hi Annie, sorry to tell you your map has been rejected.
The theme is original since there aren't any maps with similar themes at all. The build is decent, it looks like a toothbrush (although the floating Colgate sign isn't great). The main problem is the parkour, it's pretty repetitive (for example inside the Colgate is all headhitters), please try to use more varied blocks (ice, soul sand, panes, etc.)
If you change the parkour, you should definitely resubmit the map because the theme and the build are both pretty good.
Thanks for submitting, I'd love to see more maps from you!