Rejected Conveyor Belt - (Hard)

[Llighty]

I have not been doing too well with making parkour so here is a longish and original parkour
ID 52:79. 60 (ish) jumps. by llighty

 

[Dubinzi]

Giving this a -1

Positives:

• Original theme

Negatives:

• The build is very chaotic and doesn't look like a conveyor belt
• Most of the jumps are ladder jumps (not much jump variation)
• It in unclear where you should go at multiple points in the map
• Most of the parkour is floating

Suggestions:

• This theme is really difficult because there isn't much detail to a conveyor belt. I suggest scrapping this one and using a theme that would be easier to use.

 

[Llighty]

Thanks for that, im already starting a new one

 

[k_rissy]

Hello Llighty,

I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
The theme is original, as we don't have any maps relating to a conveyor belt, so good job on that!
The build is a bit messy, and only the beginning and end of the map resemble an actual conveyor belt. To help match your concept, I recommend connecting the build a bit more so that it looks more attractive. The belt itself also appears to be a bit plain; I recommend adding more details to make it look more unique.
The parkour is slightly varied, which is good, but I recommend adding more jump variety throughout the whole map. The length and difficulty of jumps do fit the difficulty, so good job on that!

Thank you for submitting your map, I would love to see more submissions from you!
Have a nice day,
Kristina