Rejected Coraline | Medium

[Drakonixal]

Username lonelyjac2 & GetMelond

Photos of your Parkour https://imgur.com/a/uAbaS

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Difficulty Medium

Number of jumps 49

 

[JiggleJigglePop]

For me, it kind of looks to flat. Add some terrain to the course so it'll look better with the houses. Good luck. +0.50

 

[Drakonixal]

For me, it kind of looks to flat. Add some terrain to the course so it'll look better with the houses. Good luck. +0.50

I'll try to add some decoration outside but there isn't much terrain. The actual house is pretty much on a flat service that rounds down on the edges.

 

[Drakonixal]

For me, it kind of looks to flat. Add some terrain to the course so it'll look better with the houses. Good luck. +0.50

I added some bushes, a flamingo and a branch to match the movie. I also edited the parkour to make it less repetitive and more fun, and I added carpets to show you where to go.

 

[JiggleJigglePop]

I added some bushes, a flamingo and a branch to match the movie. I also edited the parkour to make it less repetitive and more fun, and I added carpets to show you where to go.

You see, that's what I'm talking about, usually when people see they didn't add as much detail, they don't fix it because it's rushed. But your's took some time to make, and I'm glad you added more trees and bushes. You got my vote. :) +1

 

[ThePKFish]

Hello Drak and Melon,

I am sorry to inform you that this course is being rejected. The build is nice and definitely represents its theme. There are many house related themes, so the theme could be better. However, there isn't a house that has to do with Coraline yet. The build could still be improved. The jumps are the main reason for this course being rejected. The difficulty is good for a medium. However, the jumps aren't very fun or interesting to do and could use some more variation. I suggest that you vary up the jumps and make them more interesting. I encourage you to resubmit this course after you have fixed up the jumps and maybe the build :)

Thank you for submitting this course! I hope to see more from you in the future :D
If you have any questions, you can PM me on here, in game, or on discord

-Ashley (ThePKFish, fishy1980)