Rejected Corona - Expert (resubmission)

[JJ (_ThatGuyJJ_)]

Usernames: JumbledJ & piebrian5
Helpers: Tinycup & Geshultz
Map Name: Corona
Photo of My Parkour:
Here (via Imgur)
Warp Name: /plot v JumbledJ 3
Difficulty: Expert
Number of Jumps: 96

This may be my third and last map before mapper so cut me some slack? Okay? (Just Kidding)

 

[ThePKFish]

Hello JJ,

I am sorry to inform you that this course is being rejected. Do not take this harshly, as I do not mean it harshly (I simply mean it to be informative), but please do not resubmit if I (I cannot speak for other map judges, so this only applies to me) do not say to. I do not wish any feelings of sadness and I would love to prevent it as much as possible. Anyway, the parkour is varied in block variety but not jump variety. The build itself still could use more to actually look like a Corona bottle. If you happen to make another similar course, try to put the logo on the build rather than in a large pixel art. The theme is still good, but the build and parkour could have been improved.

Thank you for submitting this course! :D
If you have any questions, you may DM me on here, in game, or on discord! :D

-Ashley (ThePKFish, fishy1980)