Rejected Creepy Cave Parkour-Easy

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Username-BlackDogJ2007
Map Name-Creepy Mineshafts1
Plot Warp-/plot home BlackDogJ2007
Difficulty-easy
Number of Jumps-51
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Hello BlackDogJ2007,

I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
The theme is unoriginal, as we already have a few maps with a mining theme (2DMC, Goldmine, Mineshaft.) Before making a map, please make sure that the theme hasn't already been done before by going here: https://manacube.com/threads/parkour-list-with-theme.20194/
The build is somewhat accurate to how a mine shaft would look, so good job on that! However, it is a bit plain, so I would consider adding more details throughout the build, particularly on the inside!
The parkour is quite repetitive with the use of ladders. Try to incorporate different jump styles throughout your entire map! You can look at recently accepted maps for some examples of these! The parkour is incorporated with the theme a tiny bit, but it could definitely benefit with more variety as mentioned previously. The difficulty of the jumps is good for the easy difficulty, but 51 jumps is a bit too lengthy for an easy.

Thank you for submitting your map, I would love to see more submissions from you!
Have a nice day,
Kristina
 
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