Rejected Crisps - Expert Map

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Builder : xMika
Helper : Cuyyy
Map Name : Crisps
Checkpoints : 3
Jumps : ~60
Difficulty : Expert
/plot tp xMika 2
 

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-1 theme is an idk
parkour could be better (ADD MORE JUMPS)
build needs work.
 

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Hey xMika,

I'm sorry to have to tell you that your map has been REJECTED. Although there are several food-related maps, there are no crisps/chips maps so it definitely adds a new take on the food theme, well done! The build is not very attractive and I find it quite difficult to truly see any resemblance of a bag of chips/ chips. The PK length and difficulty did not fit the expert difficulty (it was rather short and fit the hard difficulty better). There was not a lot of variation in jumps, there were a lot of ladder and Redstone jumps. There are also a lot of barrier blocks without any signs/item frames telling the player they are there, making the PK very confusing. Also, the placement of the barrier blocks was wrongfully done and allows players to skip a big portion of the beginning of the map (pictures before). Don't let this discourage you, we must learn frmo our mistakes. I hope to see more map submissions from you in the future!

 
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