Rejected Daphne - Insane

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Username: belop
Map Name: Daphne
Plot: /plot visit belop 2
Difficulty: Insane
Number of Jumps: ~130
Number of Checkpoints: 7
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I love it! Even though most of the parkour is floating it is spaced out from the build enough to not make it look messy. Good luck
 

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Hello belop,

Thank you for your patience while this map was being judged.
I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
The theme is original, as we don't have any maps based on Daphne, so good job on that!
The build is accurate to what you were going for. Maybe try using different types of blocks other than clay, and maybe incorporating some more details into this. One other note; her chest is a bit...prominent (trying to say this in the best way possible) so if you resubmit, please fix this.
The parkour is the main concern.
There is quite a bit of variety throughout. However, the parkour is quite difficult, even for the insane difficulty. There isn't a lot of room for momentum. The parkour is also floating quite a bit, making it look messy and it takes away from the main build. The length of this course is good for the insane difficulty.

Thank you for submitting this map; I would love to see more submissions from you!
Have a nice day,
Kristina
 
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