Rejected Dark Oak Door Way:expert

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Builder:Codykat
Map name:dark oak Door Way
Difficulty:expert
around 105 jumps
check points:4
DO /plot H CodyKat then your there
here are 5 photos of my parkour map
I am fairly new here so if there is anything that i need to know about making maps please tell me hope you like it.
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Hello CodyKat,

I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
The theme is unoriginal, as we already have several maps based off of Minecraft objects; however, we do not have any specific door maps.
The build is
accurate to what you were going for; however, it is quite flat in the sense that it is a simple rectangle (I understand that this may be unavoidable due to the theme.) I think that it could benefit with maybe some more decorations in the surrounding area, and giving the leaves on top a rounder shape.
The parkour is quite
repetitive throughout with the same jumps in certain sections (fences, dirt, leaves, etc.) Try incorporating different types of jumps throughout your entire map! Overall, the length of the course is alright for an expert map; however, the jumps are a bit too easy.

Thank you for submitting your map, I would love to see more submissions from you!
Have a nice day,
Kristina
 
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