Rejected DeathStar- hard map

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Leo09_F

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-name: DeathStar
-56 jumps
-4 checkpoints
-creators: Leo09_F and ZAC09158
-tester: TigerTwist
-helpers: Ne0z_ and SuperrrStarr
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I didnt even-
 

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Literally there was a map called deathstarpk that was just accepted, so theme is unoriginal.
 

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Hi Leo09_F, ZAC09158 and helpers.

The THEME of your map is unoriginal, as we already have maps based of the Death Star. (DeathStarPK). Before creating a parkour please make sure to check out the map list to see all the maps accepted on the server!

Secondly, your PARKOUR. Your parkour was alright. At times it was very inconsistent and unforgiving. Next time try balance your jumps so everything flows good all together!

Last but not least, your BUILD The build is alright. The Death Star looks a little plain and more detail could be added to improve it. To improve your builds you could try to make depth and contrast by choosing different blocks that goes well together but doesn't disappear inside each other.

Good luck in your future map submissions! [Tiger]
If you have any questions, feel free to message me on discord at Elly#5555
Have a great day,
Ellt
 
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