Rejected Deodorant - Hard

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xPuny

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Builder: xPuny
Map Name: Deodorant
Warp: /plot v xPuny 2
Difficulty: Hard
Jump Count: 64
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Hello xPuny,

I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
The theme is original, so well done here!
The build is a concern. Overall, while it is somewhat accurate to what you were going for, it is quite lacking in detail, and there are issues with the details that are currently present. I would recommend expanding your build; the lettering on the can feels quite cramped and is unappealing at present. The spray does look nice!
The parkour is another concern. There is some variety throughout, but a lot of repetition within certain sections. Make sure your map is varied throughout! The difficulty of your map is also a bit inconsistent; overall, this feels a bit too easy for the difficulty. The path is a bit unclear at times, so make sure you have a clear path and directions for players to follow! One final note; easy-hard maps need to be possible on 1.18, so please make sure you test your map on this version!

Thank you for submitting this map, I would love to see more submissions from you!
 
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