Rejected Desert Of Doom - Easy Or Medium Level

[NovaCore_]

Here i have made a desert themed parkour map called "Desert of Doom" I built it in creative, plot 1 IGN AdamBlocked or /warp DesertParkour. Easy Or Medium map. Sorry new PC won't let me use F1. Here is some screenshots:

 

[Billybo10000]

This map has been Rejected!

Reasons for this include -

The story is too random, and rather typical! The house part of the story, makes no sense as you could see the hidden parkour in the floor, from the beginning.
The jumps are very simple, the cactus farm has literally no purpose in the map.
The end is rather random, "WHAT HOME!?" How can we care about a story, if we don't get invested with the characters, or the locations... Etc...

Sorry, but you can always apply with new maps.

~ Billy