Hoi LokiLaevatein,
Sorry to tell you that your map have been
rejected.
The
theme is pretty
interesting, there is already some Turtle maps (
Turtle and
TurtleCrown), but making this like a DiscWorld is pretty original. The
build is pretty
nice too, those turtles looks nice and cute.
The
parkour is why I reject this map. The first part can be
skip like this :
https://prntscr.com/jvmlnr
It's also pretty
confusing at the end, and there is a lot of useless
invisible blocks.
However there is some
interesting jumps on your
parkour, just try to build it on your build and not floating around the build !
You can resubmit it, if you patch the parkour, I will be happy to accept your map !
Thanks for submitting your map, would be really good to see more maps from you !