Rejected Dominoes - Insane

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Usernames: Faudon and BlueRaspberries
Map Name: Dominoes
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Warp: /Plot V BlueRaspberries 1
Difficulty: Insane
 

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Dominoes Pizza? Do I get any?

GL +0 for now because the map is just squares with dots on it. but theme is original (I think) could be better if you added some of them laying down and or like when they fall like /. Pk i think could be better judging by the pictures. GL though. The build in my opinion is very bad. But the parkour looks challenging which is unique and great for the map.
 

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I knew people would compare it to dominoes pizza haha. I agree about the build, not that great, was gonna try to incorporate dominos falling but wouldn't know how to build it. Its my first build so it obviously isn't that great. Thanks for your opinion!
 

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Hoi Blue and Faud,
Sorry to tell you that your map have been rejected.
The theme is pretty original, the build however is not really good, the dominoes looks pretty plain and unattractive, try to add some detail, even if I think it's a bit impossible with what you build. The parkour is not really good too, it's really varied, which is good, but there is a lot of flaws too, I found your parkour a bit confusing (Mostly the 2 slimes jumps from outside a build into Inside a build, we have no idea where to go, and we don't have a lot of time to react, and please do not put maze, they are annoying and confusing), a bit repetitive (There is quite an amount of ladders jumps, but there is even more neos, try to lower a bit the amount of neos (and ladders) please), there is also 3 impossible parts right here : http://prntscr.com/m1vroz http://prntscr.com/m1vs59 http://prntscr.com/m1vscp (For the 2 last screeshots, the hitbox of the blue piston is smaller than the red one, making the jump impossible/too hard), and there is some exploits here : http://prntscr.com/m1vsqz (We can go to the edge of the landmines) http://prntscr.com/m1vsv5 http://prntscr.com/m1vt45

Thanks for submitting your map, would be really good to see more maps from you !
 
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