Rejected E.T. - Easy

[LovelyLing]

Hello! My name is Lovelyling and my map is called E.T. This is my 4th plot. It's an easy map, and has about 34 jumps. 3thanols also helped me with this build.

 

[k_rissy]

Hello Lovelyling,

Your map will now be marked as ongoing; I have reviewed your map and it will now be discussed with map judges. This may take time, so please be patient.

 

[k_rissy]

Hello Lovelyling,

I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
The theme is original, well done there.
The build is a concern. Overall, it isn't very accurate to the reference you were going for. A lot of the shaping is off and it just could overall benefit with being expanded and more details added (especially head/neck/back).
The parkour feels repetitive in certain places, so try to maintain some variety throughout. Feel free to check this player-made thread to help you-
https://manacube.com/threads/basics-parkour-variance-and-self-constraint.78459/
-These barriers need to be changed, they interrupt the pathing

http://imgur.com/nKu1DSK

-The pathing overall could also use some improvement; consider looking at another thread made by one of our community judges!
https://manacube.com/threads/basics-show-dont-tell-how-to-path-good-signage-and-directions.78219/

Thank you for submitting this map, I would love to see more submissions from you!