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Hello ddfungaming, _laginator and moistsocks4ever,
I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
Your theme is somewhat original.
Your build is better than before but still needs some changes. The eagle is very wide and doesn't show block variation/detail. The beak is also very high up on his face and very thick. In regards to the platform, the branch the eagle is on does not make sense realistically as it looks as if it grew from random. The trees around the eagle do not make sense proportionally, since trees are typically larger than the eagle itself
The parkour is very repetitive and doesn't show variation in skill jumps. if you'd like to improve your parkour, look at some newer medium maps or check out this thread https://manacube.com/threads/basics-parkour-variance-and-self-constraint.78459/[sophia]
Thank you for submitting this map, I would love to see more submissions from you!
I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
Your theme is somewhat original.
Your build is better than before but still needs some changes. The eagle is very wide and doesn't show block variation/detail. The beak is also very high up on his face and very thick. In regards to the platform, the branch the eagle is on does not make sense realistically as it looks as if it grew from random. The trees around the eagle do not make sense proportionally, since trees are typically larger than the eagle itself
The parkour is very repetitive and doesn't show variation in skill jumps. if you'd like to improve your parkour, look at some newer medium maps or check out this thread https://manacube.com/threads/basics-parkour-variance-and-self-constraint.78459/[sophia]
Thank you for submitting this map, I would love to see more submissions from you!
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