Rejected Earth

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• Built by Dannn_
• it is called Earth
• its on /plot v Dannn_ 2
• it is an easy map
• 31 jumps long
(i am aware of there being a map similar to this, which at the time i did not know was there untill someone told me but i guess it is worth trying)
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Unfortunately the theme is taken (/log globe)
 

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Hey dan, you are a very good builder as i saw from your wings build, unfortunately this build is taken already. I see a future mapper but you need original themes.
 
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thankyou for that! i think my problem is i come up with unoriginal ideas and then i get told about other maps with a similar theme :)
 

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thankyou for that! i think my problem is i come up with unoriginal ideas and then i get told about other maps with a similar theme :)
I was the exact same way as you when I started making maps. Good luck!
 

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Hello Dannn_,

I regret to inform you that your map is REJECTED.

The THEME of your map is unoriginal, as we already have maps based around the Earth (EarthCenter). Before creating a parkour please make sure to check out this template here to see all the maps accepted on the server!

The BUILD of your map is a ok. The map is accurate for what you are going for, but I wish there was more detail and texture in and around your build.

The PARKOUR fits the length and difficulty of a easy map, so good job on that! Your parkour has some variance, but most of it is in clumps causing it to still be repetitive. To add more variance, try adding more jumps with unique blocks like pots, water, heads, vines, etc.

Thank you for taking the time to create a map, I hope to see more submissions from you in the future.
If you have any questions feel free to reach out to me on discord at Elly#5555
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