Rejected [Easy] Biome Rush PK

[Lamont]

This course was made by me YoloMcSwagDragon and supagamer900.This course has 37 jumps.it has 1 checkpoint.[missplaced a checkpoint sign at the ice tree] do /Warp BiomeRushPK to play! Please enjoy! :D

 

[Supagamer900]

i will upload pictures shortly
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[Lamont]

supagamer the cactis grew pleasse fix before pokezelda plays it. :D

 

[Lamont]

Sorry pokezelda in advance this parkour kinda sucks. One of my worst parkour courses. I am sorry in advance

 

[Billybo10000]

Sadly your map has been rejected!

Reasons for this include:

• The theme... One day somebody will do this theme well and I will rejoice, but today is not that day. Each area of the parkour felt far too sectioned off. You could tell the biomes and their changes, but at the same time, it was so clean cut that there was no sense of natural progression.
• In the real world, ice biomes would not be right next to desert biomes.
• The parkour is rather simple, which works, however you've committed a sin of parkour building that I have a distaste for... You built it on the wall of your plot. That is something we tend to frown upon as it makes transferring the parkour that much harder if it ever did get accepted. Therefore, I implore you to keep your builds one block away from the walls at all times.

~ Billy