Rejected Easy Map Submission - Summer Treats

[happyheart]

I have made a map of Easy difficulty on the Minevast Creative server. It is called Summer Treats, with the theme of summer foods/desserts, including popsicles, ice cream, watermelon, cherries, and more. (Since summer is coming soon) This map has 26 jumps and 2 checkpoints. It was created by happyheart (me) and you can get to Summer Treats by using /warp SummerTreats. Gabe22car set that warp, and you might see him in the following screenshots. Note that there are two other maps that I have built above this one, so don't confuse the two. Actually, it's pretty easy to tell the difference.
Here are some screenshots:

^View from the starting point

^Overlooking the map from the side of the start. Gabe, the one who set the warp, is in the picture.

^Overlooking the map from the furthest point north. Gabe is there again.

^Overlooking the map from the end point.

 

[DaTNTBoy]

Well done! Very nice job :D
I think this should be a medium, just add maybe 8-10 more "treats" in there.
I think the parkour is very creative and I think it should be released.
Please specify a /warp just ask a donor or a moderator.
- Legendary DaTNTBoy

 

[Billybo10000]

Well done! Very nice job :D
I think this should be a medium, just add maybe 8-10 more "treats" in there.
I think the parkour is very creative and I think it should be released.
Please specify a /warp just ask a donor or a moderator.
- Legendary DaTNTBoy

If you did not notice, there is a warp in the main post. /SummerTreats

 

[DaTNTBoy]

If you did not notice, there is a warp in the main post. /SummerTreats

didnt see that sorry

 

[Billybo10000]

Rejected - However, we believe this course could be accepted, if you made a few design changes. We feel the clay makes the course feel rather gloomy, which contradicts the theme. If you used wool, or another more colourful/vibrant block type, we would be more inclined to accept.

Good luck, and feel free to re-submit this course if yo udecide to make the appropriate changes.

~ Billy