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Not a bad easy course. There's a few difficult jumps in the beginning, but nothing too major. This would have very likely made it if there wasn't already that donor course Zoot was talking about. You never know, it could be accepted. Make sure when you go to build a new theme, you ask the players on Parkour if there is already a themed course like it. If you don't get an answer feel free to message me and I'll get the answer for you.
I look forward to seeing future submissions by you
~Cheech <3
I look forward to seeing future submissions by you
~Cheech <3
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Hello Isa,
Your course has been Rejected due to the following reasons:
-There is already an up themed course in the Donor courses shown here.
-Colorful course themes are used way too often. Try to get a theme no-one has used before! If there are any categories you can't see feel free to ask me to surf them for you to make sure the theme isn't there.
-The house didn't have a lot of detail. It was just barren floors.
-In the movie the house was lifted by a lot of separate balloons which would look like above. The way it was built on your plot it looked more like a giant hot air balloon.
-There is a skip in the map located here. The player can jump around the purple block and skip half of the map. (Easily fixable with barriers)
What I liked:
-The difficulty of the jumps was good for an easy course.
-Implementation of Iron bar parkour.
What can be improved:
-Theme (Choosing and Building)
-Detail
-Testing (to be sure all jumps are possible and there are no skips)
If you want to improve some of the problems listed above then re-submit your map feel free to do so.
~Preston
Your course has been Rejected due to the following reasons:
-There is already an up themed course in the Donor courses shown here.
-Colorful course themes are used way too often. Try to get a theme no-one has used before! If there are any categories you can't see feel free to ask me to surf them for you to make sure the theme isn't there.
-The house didn't have a lot of detail. It was just barren floors.
-In the movie the house was lifted by a lot of separate balloons which would look like above. The way it was built on your plot it looked more like a giant hot air balloon.
-There is a skip in the map located here. The player can jump around the purple block and skip half of the map. (Easily fixable with barriers)
What I liked:
-The difficulty of the jumps was good for an easy course.
-Implementation of Iron bar parkour.
What can be improved:
-Theme (Choosing and Building)
-Detail
-Testing (to be sure all jumps are possible and there are no skips)
If you want to improve some of the problems listed above then re-submit your map feel free to do so.
~Preston
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