Rejected End Of Doom!!!

[toebus]

Prepare to have some fun pal!

[DOUBLEPOST=1445286297][/DOUBLEPOST]Hope you enjay the Parkour at: /plot tp toebus!

 

[PrestonTheSlime]

-This definitely was an easy parkour. (Not medium)
-The theme was a bit lacking
-The story was silly
~Preston <3

 

[Tenshi]

I dont see a theme at all, Therefore this doesn't seem to be a full parkour yet.

 

[Angel_Scarz]

Well first of all its not really a theme like what Tenshi said
Second: of all A LOT of end parkour's have been made!
Third: I agree with PrestonTheSlime (Not easy Or Medium & Messed up story) lol
Fourth: Try to improve it more toebus
Fifth: Please Inprove the jumps add more & make some easier


THANK YOU!

 

[gogre]

Rejected, there is no theme, parkour map is unclear.

 

[Tenshi]

Rejected, there is no theme, parkour map is unclear.

You marked this as Accepted.

 

[gogre]

You marked this as Accepted.

My mistake, has been fixed, thankyou ^^

 

[Tenshi]

My mistake, has been fixed, thankyou ^^

No problem. c: