Hi there,
I am very confused with this map. First of all, you have put your map on the same plot as your other one, so I had trouble wondering where about to start. Moreover, I do not understand where to go, so I believe you should at least put some signs or change the layout of your map completely. However, I do like the build of this map, your build represents the End Portal well, but that does not make up for the points in which I have stated above. The parkour jumps are pretty varied, I can see ladder, slime, and glass pane parkour.
Overall, I will be giving this map a 0 , due to issues with the layout, but if you change this, I will definitely increase my score.
Good luck! :)