Rejected Escaped Dinosaur--Medium

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Theme : Escaped Dinosaur
Creator : tony999J909CP8J , YuCharile2360
Jumps : 56
Checkpoint : 5
Difficulty place: none
Medium Map

/plot v tony999J909CP8J 3
This map talking about the dinosaur want to escape the paper and try to running out of the paper
U need to escape the dinosaur and go parkour :>
 

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Hello!

Unfortunately, your maps is being REJECTED.
The theme is semi-original, so good job on that!

The build itself does lack shaping sadly. The dinosaur itself is very rectangular. I would suggest enlarging the build overall, to be able to utilise it further for parkour pathing, rather the floating end section!

The parkour fits the length and difficulty for the good part, so good job on that! The main hard jump was the fence - slab neo on the inside at the end of a CP. Be sure that your blockages are not hidden either! Things like banners shouldn't be used to hide fences, etc. There is some variation, so good job on that! You have used some variation! Use more such as ice, glass panes, heads, cocoa beans, water, minecarts, trapdoors, etc, to space out your variation more.

We hope to see more maps from you in the future.
Have a good day/night
-Hayley
 
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